Bob, I'm so happy to see your version!
Wow, you have great timing, great feel, and a great tele sound!
Like I wrote in your youtube post: You did the work!
So happy to see that you learned from my lesson and that you're using the ideas. Not only that, you are also making them your own, and making them sound like you! That's the goal! Awesome playing, and I look forward to see more of your playing here on the site!